Friday, 12 September 2008

"And Now, The End Is Near..."

With nothing else left to do on this, I plucked up the guts to go back to the night club!


I've almost totally reworked the page. If you compare this with my original page three, hopefully you'll be able to see where I've tried to improve the dynamics and composition.

These are moderately tight pencils and I hope I won't have to do too much when I come to ink them.

1 comment:

qualia said...

much more action here, great...looking forward to seeing the whole thing finished. good luck with the final push, x